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A note: I agonized over the last line, the alternative was "in class hastily lit". finally I went with the above but I'll leave the line here for you to follow the imagery.
I'm good with "in darkness hastily lit." It gets your point across. No need to stress over it. After all, it's poetry, not brain surgery.